ugh CLIFF HANGERS!!! …ahem…. so anyway. That was definitely worth the wait. The story is progressing nicely and all the characters seem important its hard to just like one :). I honestly have no idea whats going on which I like because it makes it that much more suspense full. So good job guys cant wait for the next chapter…. no really i cant wait CHOP CHOP!!
you keep making the same grammatical mistake . the characters shouldn’t be saying could of. the correct term is either could have or the short form , could’ve .
ugh CLIFF HANGERS!!! …ahem…. so anyway. That was definitely worth the wait. The story is progressing nicely and all the characters seem important its hard to just like one :). I honestly have no idea whats going on which I like because it makes it that much more suspense full. So good job guys cant wait for the next chapter…. no really i cant wait CHOP CHOP!!
you keep making the same grammatical mistake . the characters shouldn’t be saying could of. the correct term is either could have or the short form , could’ve .
good catch, thanks. fixed.
creature of habit i suppose.